内容要点：1、翻栅栏进游乐场。    2、坐在摩天轮上按电钮。

3、摩天轮停在空中。    4、呼喊救命。      5、园内工人解救。

(当事人被解救后的表现。)

One possible version:

  On Tuesday evening Jim and Robert walked past the funfair. It was closed. They both loved the funfair, so they went in.

  They jumped over the fence and ran towards the Ferris wheel. As soon as they got into a carriage, they pressed the button and the Ferris wheel started working. They were so excited!  They went round and round many times. Suddenly, the Ferris wheel stopped. The boys were at the top of the wheel and they couldn’t get down. They were very afraid and started crying for help!  At last , the gatekeeper heard them and helped them get down. Their faces were red. They said they wouldn’t do that again.

 

 

例五：根据下图及提示，写一篇120字左右的书面表达。

1．略描述下图。   

2．开快车的危险。   

One possible version:

      As is described in the picture, the driver is speeding. I think he must be doing over one hundred and sixty miles at the moment. It seems as if the driver is trying to drive the car even faster than the plane above. The passenger sitting behind him looks terrified. But the driver is smiling and feeling quite confident, saying "No sweat".

     As is known to all among all the causes leading to traffic accidents, speeding is the most dangerous. Because the driver is traveling too quickly, he can't stop the car in time to avoid an accident.

     As a driver, he must realize the harmfulness of speeding both to himself and to the society. Life is very important. For the sake of yourself and for others, don't drive too fast, especially when traffic is heavy.

 

I. 用于文章主题句
1. 不用说…
It goes without saying that子句
= (It is) needless to say (that)子句
= It is obvious that子句
= Obviously, S. + V.
例︰不用说早睡早起是值得的。
It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.

2. …是不可能的; 无法…
There is no Ving
= There is no way of Ving.
= There is no possibility of Ving.
= It is impossible to V.
= It is out of the question to V.
= No one can V.
= We cannot V.
例︰不可否认的,成功的事业关键在于健康的身心。
There is not denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind.

3. 我深信…
I am greatly convinced (that)子句
= I am greatly assured (that)子句
例︰我深信预防是重于治疗。
I am greatly convinced that prevention is better than cure.

4. 在各种…之中…
Among various kinds of …, …
= Of all the …, …
例︰在各种运动中,我尤其喜欢慢跑。
Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.

5. …是很容易证明的。
It can be easily proved (that)子句
例︰时间最珍贵是很容易证明的。
It can be easily proved that nothing is more precious than time.
6. …无论如何强调都不为过
… cannot be overemphasized
例︰交通安全的重要性无论如何强调都不为过。
The importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized.

7. 就我的看法…；我认为…
In my opinion, …
= To my mind, ….
= As far as I am concerned, …
= I am of the opinion that子句
例︰就我的看法，打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。
In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.

8. (A) 每个人都知道…
Everyone knows (that)子句
(B) 就我所知…
As far as my knowledge is concerned, …
例︰就我所知下列方法对我帮助很大。
As far as my knowledge is concerned, the following ways are of great help to me.

9. 毫无疑问地…
There is no doubt (that)子句
例︰毫无疑问地近视在我国的年轻人中是一个严重的问题。
There is no doubt that near-sightedness is a serious problem among the youth of our country.

10. 根据我个人经验…
According to my personal experience, …
= Based on my personal experience, …
例︰根据我个人经验微笑已带给我许多好处。
According to my personal experience, smile has done me a lot of good.

11. 在我认识的人当中也许没有一个人比…更值得我尊敬。
Of all the people I know, perhaps non deserves my respect more than …
例︰在我认识的人当中也许没有一个人比我的英文老师张老师更值得我尊敬。
Of all the people I know, perhaps non deserves my respect more than Miss Chang, my English teacher.

12. 在我的求学过程中我忘不了…
In the course of my schooling. I will never forget …
例︰在我的求学过程中我忘不了学习英文所遭到的大困难。
In the course of my schooling. I will never forget the great difficulty I encountered in learning English.